Comments (Feature Wrangler)
- a mistake in a summary "and provides an provides an"
- I'm not sure mentioning link with Linus makes a good karma (as some people could understand it as Gnome 3 offence)
- for scope - please create a list of packages being imported to Fedora with status of how far the import is (packages, under review - with #bz etc.)
- I'd rephrase User Experience section and use different words
- please, provide more details in Release Notes section (does not have to be final text)
- email address does not work
Thanks --Jaroslav 12:49, 20 July 2012 (UTC)